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Munakata Koshimaru
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Munakata Koshimaru


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Specialties: Taijutsu | Bukijutsu | Ninjutsu | Genjutsu
Elements: Doton | Katon | Fūton

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PostSubject: What I think needs some editing and such   What I think needs some editing and such EmptyFri May 20, 2016 11:19 pm

Bijū

For Shukaku, take out Magnet Release. Shukaku doesn't have Magnet Release and Sand, even at low levels, is rather....pesky to combat. Just so you know, Sand itself isn't a element in canon, but it has some properties of Doton, such as it being weak to Raiton. As for things like Iron Sand and Gold Dust, I suggest adding them (or rather the learning of them) to the limited list. Despite the numerous Magnet Release Users in canon, only 2 are able to use Iron Sand and Gold Dust...and they're both dead.

For Saiken, I suggest changing it from Acid Release/Bubble Release to Corrosive Based Bubble Suiton (Water Release), as the acid is naturally secreted from Saiken's body and is mucus-y (hence why the bubbles). Plus, people tend to get confused with "Acid Release" as they think you mean Boil Release.

For Goku, make both Fire and Earth mandatory for Lava Release as it's stated in canon that Fire and Earth are needed to make it. Almost, make note that Son Goku's Lava Release differs from normal Lava Release in that Goku's is more like Magma, which opens more possible opportunities in creating jutsu, as it is more solid.

Roshi's Lava Release:
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Mei Terumi's Lava Release:

For Chomei, please make note it mean's her brand of Chakra Threads for her jutsu because as it stands, it means Puppetry is not possible since only her jinchūriki has threads.

For Matatabi, I think it's plausible that her benefit is that she's immune to Katon since...well....she is living fire...though this one is really only a suggestion.

Staff Grading

I think we need a system for us staff to grade things, since we really don't have one and I see certain things being approved that are a bit too imbalanced for my liking. Such as A-S jutsu being approved...with only a 1 post cooldown. If we keep approving things like that, people will just spam their jutsus, even if it costs alot of chakra. We need to keep things balanced.


I will add more later
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Myojin Yashagoro
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PostSubject: Re: What I think needs some editing and such   What I think needs some editing and such EmptyMon May 30, 2016 1:29 am

I agree, we do indeed need a Grading System of some sort.
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Munakata Koshimaru
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Munakata Koshimaru


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PostSubject: Re: What I think needs some editing and such   What I think needs some editing and such EmptyMon May 30, 2016 6:51 am

I'm planning to make one.
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